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Postby Miss-Elodia » Mon Jun 24, 2013 11:22 pm

Hello everyone, here I can council one of my favorite band and my passion: fanfiction :)
Excuse me if there's any mistakes, I'm not writing english very well. Plus, I hope I offense no one with this...
Here is my first story, of how I imagine the life of Hella with the guys. I hope you'll enjoy it!

[EDIT 2020: I have rewritten this story. You can go read it by clicking the link in my signature.]

The Bet

The monsters were all watching the HellTV, comfortably sit on the sofa. Hella was putting nailpolish on her porcelain hands while Mr Lordi keeps on switching channels, looking for something less boring.

Mr Lordi: Hella, I’m hungry. Cook something please.
Mana: Yeah, some lasagna would be perfect.
Amen: With human meat, please.
Hella: Do it yourselves boys, I’m busy.
Mr Lordi: Come on! You won’t ruin your nails.
OX: One more thing, I tore the bottom of my coat, could you sew it back please?
Mana: Me too?
Hella: Sometimes I wonder if you could manage to spend one day without me doing the laundry, the cooking and other chores.
Mr Lordi: Of course we can do it. I bet on it: if we win, you do everything we want for a week. If you win, we do everything you want for a whole month.
OX: (whispers) Are you serious L? We’re gonna lose pathetically!
Mr Lordi: (to OX) Shut up. So do we have a deal?
Hella: We do. I’ll go chopping tomorrow. I’ll make sure to leave you a bunch of dirty clothes, dirty dishes, and an empty fridge!
Amen: Hey! That’s not fair.
Mr Lordi: Do what you want Hella, tomorrow night we’ll be the winners.
Hella: I let you dream about it. I’m going to bed, goodnight boys.
Mana: What about my lasagna?
Hella: In the oven, just turn it on!
Amen: (to himself) We’re gonna have our asses kicked, L’s just too proud to admit it…

TOMORROW MORNING:
Good morning boys! I’ve gone chopping with Lady Awa. I’ll be back at midnight.
Have a VERY nice day…
- Hella.


Mr Lordi: She’s gone. Now guys, here’s what we’re gonna do today. Mana, you will do the cooking and the dish washing.
Mana: I’ll try. But let me warn you, it won’t be very good.
Mr Lordi: Amen, you’ll do the laundry and you’ll sort it.
Amen: I don’t know how to use the washing machine.
Mr Lordi: Then do it in the sink. OX, you’ll do the sewing, and when you’re done you’ll take care of the garden.
OX: Are you serious? I can hold a needle with my huge fingers.
Mr Lordi: Not my problem. I’ll do the remainder: sweeping, cleaning etc.
Amen: You kept the easiest chores for yourself…
Mr Lordi: Shup up. Let’s work now, we’ll show her we can handle it all.

To Be Continued...
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Re: Miss-Elodia's Stories

Postby Kitawa » Tue Jun 25, 2013 8:51 pm

It's cool and interesting idea. :) You can make great comedy out of this story. Keep it up and welcome to the forum/fan-fic section.
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Re: Miss-Elodia's Stories

Postby Miss-Elodia » Wed Jun 26, 2013 12:22 am

Thank you ! I'm happy you like it :D
The next chapter should be there soon.
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Re: Miss-Elodia's Stories

Postby Miss-Elodia » Wed Jun 26, 2013 10:32 pm

Here's part two of my story "The Bet", you can see how our favorite Mummy and Hellbull handle the day ;)
Dedicated to Kitawa, who brought up to me the carnivorous plant idea :mrgreen:

[EDIT 2020: I have rewritten this story. You can go read it by clicking the link in my signature.]

Amen’s POV:

The Mummified One was standing in front of the washing machine, looking at all its buttons. Indeed, he’d never used it before. Hella was damn serious about the laundry, she left a whole basket of their dirty clothes. He tried to remember when he saw his Doll friend use it, in order to do just like her. He put all the clothes he could in the machine’s drum, he closed it and pressed a random button. The machine started with a loud noise, that made Amen jump with surprise. After a few minutes, the Mummy was satisfied of his work.
Amen: It wasn’t that difficult…
However, there were still some clothes left. He didn’t worry, and left, waiting for the cycle to end. He wasn’t sure how much time that would take, so he regularly came back to check it.
When the washing machine stopped, Amen took out the wet laundry. He realized with daze and horror that the darker clothes had dyed the lighter ones. Their underwear, shirts and even his bandages were now bright pink because of the blood smudges.
Amen: Oh f*ck… They’re gonna kill me.
The Pharaoh was now very nervous. To avoid getting the same results on the remaining clothes, he washed them one by one in the bathroom’s sink. He then placed them on the clothesline in the garden. But there weren’t enough pins, exasperated, he held all the remainder by tying the sleeves in a knot.
Sometime later, Amen had taken all the dried clothes and had sorted it. He was now going to every room to give back the clothes, ignoring the dyed ones. When he saw OX hurting himself with a needle, he let out a loud laugh. The Hellbull threw him a death glare.
His work finally done, he threw himself on his bed.
Amen: Hella must be a superhero or something, this is the toughest day I’ve ever lived.
He fell asleep soon after.

OX’s POV:

The Hellbull was in his room, with Mana’s coat lying on the bed, his own and a few socks too, and Hella’s sewing kit. It was true, all the needles were far too small for his fingers. However, with a little gumption and many tries, he managed to put the thread in the needle’s hole. He began to sew back the leather straps on Mana’s coat, after a few moments he felt comfortable with it.
OX: It’s not that tricky after all.
When he’s done, he did a little knot and cut out the thread. He looked upon his work, and he was quite proud of it. OX tried to fold it in order to store it, but it was like Mana’s coat was glued on the bed. He then realized: he had sewed the coat with his bed’s coverlet! He face-palmed. He took a pair of scissors and cut all the seams he’d made. He was ready now to re-do everything, but the needle was nowhere to be seen. When he sat down on his bed again, he let out a loud scream. Now he knew where it was…
OX: Damn needle!
He picked the needle up and stabbed it in the pin cushion. He heard someone laugh, it was Amen holding his clothes. The mummy put the clothes in the wardrobe and left with the same smile printed on his face.
OX: (whispers) F*ck you A**hole…
The Hellbull promised himself he would sting the Mummy’s butt with this needle later. For now he finished sewing everything, and stored it in place. He then made his way to the garden, not forgetting to bring with him some meat. Their garden was indeed very special, there were carnivorous plants everywhere. One of them especially was massive, they had named it “Kita” because of its teeth looking leaves. Kita himself was very proud of this plant.
OX fed all the plants and then left, however some vines encircled his ankles. They dragged him to Kita plant, and then the Hellbull felt himself being lifted from the ground, just above it. He was meant to be eaten by the plant.
OX: Bad Kita! Bad! Put me down at once!
He roared at the plant, which released him. OX left the garden, angry and tired, swearing at Lordi. When he came to the house, he walked past Amen’s room, and he saw him sleeping. A wicked smile drew on OX’s face as he went on searching for a needle in the sewing kit…

To Be Continued...
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Re: Miss-Elodia's Stories

Postby Rosalie » Fri Jun 28, 2013 1:24 pm

Interesting story so far and I like how you've set it out as a script. 8)
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Postby Miss-Elodia » Fri Jun 28, 2013 2:25 pm

Rosalie wrote:Interesting story so far and I like how you've set it out as a script. 8)


I'm glad you like it :D
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Re: Miss-Elodia's Stories

Postby Maddy » Sat Jun 29, 2013 4:14 pm

Hahahahaha :lol:
I love this!
This is getting really funny. Looking forward to see what will happen next and what OX plans for revenge on Amen are... :mrgreen:

(It just randomly popped into my mind that he could sew him to his bed, like he did with the coat...THIS just kills me!!! :lol: )
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Re: Miss-Elodia's Stories

Postby Miss-Elodia » Sun Jun 30, 2013 1:43 pm

Ha ha! Thanks Maddy :)
I'll keep your idea of Amen sewn to his bed, it sounds just so good !
Here's what OX is going to do to our dear Amen:
Miss-Elodia wrote:The Hellbull promised himself he would sting the Mummy’s butt with this needle later.


I should plan more "OX revenges" :wink:
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Postby Maddy » Sun Jun 30, 2013 1:50 pm

You're welcome!
Yeah I know that this was his original plan...but don't you know that feeling when you change those plans within seconds just because something is so tempting? xD

Yes, you should definately plan more of those revenges! :D

But keep this great and funny story up anyway. :)
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Postby Miss-Elodia » Sun Jun 30, 2013 5:56 pm

Maddy wrote:Yeah I know that this was his original plan...but don't you know that feeling when you change those plans within seconds just because something is so tempting? xD

Of course I know, I just didn't think of it until now XD
OX versus Amen, that will be fun to write (maybe another story I'll do? ^^). I adore them :wink:

Next chapter will be there soon, with Mana and Mr Lordi as our guests :)
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Re: Miss-Elodia's Stories

Postby Maddy » Sun Jun 30, 2013 7:22 pm

*muhahahhaha* :lol:
That sounds like a great plan. But first you should finish one.
(That's at least what I think because having too much stuff going on at the same time can be really stressful and confusing)

I'm really looking forward to read it! :)
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Re: Miss-Elodia's Stories

Postby Miss-Elodia » Tue Jul 02, 2013 6:13 pm

Here's the next chapter, I hope you'll like it ^^

[EDIT 2020: I have rewritten this story. You can go read it by clicking the link in my signature.]

Mana’s POV:
Feeling his stomach empty, the Minister of Sinister took the only cooking book they have and looked at the pages. Every recipe was tempting, but Hella’s threat had been done: there was almost nothing in the fridge and in the cupboards. Mana stopped at one page and looked at it with hungry eyes.
Mana: Human meat shepherd’s pie, that sounds delicious.
He began to search for all the ingredients he needed for this recipe. He easily found human meet and spices, at least Hella had been kind enough to leave these. But he soon realized they were out of potatoes and onions. It was too late to go to the supermarket, so he searched everywhere for any leftovers or canned food they’d forgotten about at the bottom of the cupboards. He found a jar, which contained homemade brain mash. He decided to use it instead of potatoes, and he also added a little bit of the blood that was left in the fridge. He fried the meat and put it in a baking dish, along with the brain mash and blood. He placed it in the oven and turned the thermostat on. While the dish was cooking, Mana put all the cookware in the dishwasher. He remembered that pans are meant to be washed by hand. He did so with a rough sponge. When he’s done, he saw that the bottom of the pan was all scratched.
Mana: Ooops. I hope she won’t notice.
He stored everything in place and went to the living room, which was surprisingly clean and well arranged.
Mana: Wow, Lordi-Miau did a good job.
He turned the radio on and sat on the sofa.

Mr Lordi’s POV:
The Lord on his side, was cleaning the bathroom, and he was exhausted. Hella was supposed to come back in less than a few hours, but he was determinated to prove her wrong. He’d been scrubbing the room for a while now, swearing about Hella, the other monsters, and about those hairs in the drains. Errk.
Mr Lordi: This is humiliating…
He realized for a moment how his Doll friend was spending her day to. It was true: it’s humiliating, especially when the other persons are doing nothing to help. Though he may be the worst monster of them all, he promised himself he would try to help Hella in the future.
The bathroom was the last room he had to clean. He already did every other room in the house, and even found some interesting things. For example he found out that Mana was sleeping with a cat plush, and that OX had some very special readings hidden under his bed. He knew the Hellbull wasn’t that innocent… In Amen’s room he found that his friend had a thing for poetry (there was a lot of notebooks full of poems under the bed). He didn’t dare to go in Hella’s room.
Finally, the bathroom was shining clean. The Lord went to his own room, and reached for paint in a drawer. He stood in front of his unfinished paint of a woman with white eyes, holding a skull with spikes. He relaxed as he began to paint.
He smelled something burnt.
Mr Lordi: (shouts) Mana, is our dinner burning?

Mana’s POV:
Mana: Oh no! No! No! No!
He ran as fast as he could to the kitchen, only to see black smoke coming from the oven. He quickly removed the dish from it, and sighed at the sight of the burnt pie. It was coal black and smelled weird. The Pastor was disappointed, he tried his best to offer his friends a good meal. There was no food left in the kitchen, they’d have to eat the pie anyway
Mr Lordi: (from far) Mana? What’s going on?
OX: (from outside) What’s that smoke?
Mana: Guys! Dinner is served…

They all sat around the table as Mana brought the burnt pie. They all looked at each other while Mana was filling their plates, and they sighed. They all seemed awfully tired and they were waiting for one single person.
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Re: Miss-Elodia's Stories

Postby Isa » Wed Jul 03, 2013 1:17 pm

Just finish read chapter hadn't occassion to read yet and I laught a lot when imagine some scene, love specially the cat plush as I was on imagine Mana sleeping with the one I offer him :D
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Postby Miss-Elodia » Wed Jul 03, 2013 1:57 pm

Isa wrote:I was on imagine Mana sleeping with the one I offer him :D

That sounds just so cute! It's nice to see you here :)
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Postby Maddy » Wed Jul 03, 2013 8:07 pm

Miss-Elodia wrote:For example he found out that Mana was sleeping with a cat plush, and that OX had some very special readings hidden under his bed. He knew the Hellbull wasn’t that innocent… In Amen’s room he found that his friend had a thing for poetry (there was a lot of notebooks full of poems under the bed).


Really interesting stuff that Mr Lordi found out here! :lol:
But that's exactly how I see that too. Amen is the innocent one and OX is more like Amen acts on stage! XD

Hope to see the next part up here soon.
I'm really curious about Hellas reaction to that situation and of course what OXs revenge on Amen will be...:mrgreen:
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Postby Miss-Elodia » Wed Jul 03, 2013 11:48 pm

Here it is, the final part of the story! Don't worry though, I think I'll make little one shots that should follow this story. Enjoy! I hope the end is good to your taste.

[EDIT 2020: I have rewritten this story. You can go read it by clicking the link in my signature.]

Past midnight, Hella came home with bags full of clothes, and her blood stained axe attached to her belt. She saw the boys asleep on the sofa. She couldn’t hold back a little laugh when she saw that they were watching My Little Pony on the TV. They may be adult monsters, they were still children in their minds sometimes.
Hella: Oh… Aren’t they lovely when they’re sleeping?
She looked around her and saw that the room was impeccable. Everything was at its rightful place, there were neither more dirty clothes nor dirty dishes, and the boys had even cleaned up their rooms. She’d never seen the house that perfect. When she came back to the living room, she noticed with surprise that they even managed to sew their coats back themselves, and she admitted they did a great job. Perhaps they won the bet after all, she did not see any flaws.
They woke up soon after she’d spoken. They all rushed to her and hugged her, well, except Mr Lordi.
OX: We’re so sorry Hella!
Amen: We didn’t realize how hard it was for you.
Mana: We love you Hella-Miau!
Hella: I love you too my adorable monsters. How about you Lordi? How was the day?
They all turned their heads to him, as he was still on the sofa. He glared at them with blood injected eyes, admitting his defeat.
Mr Lordi: Exhausting, toilsome, grueling and every other synonym you want.
Hella: That means I won the bet?
Mr Lordi: You won it, and I always keep my promises. We’ll do everything you want for a month.
Hella: Thank you, now you know how hard it is to take care of the house and all its inhabitants. All I want from you is just a little help with the chores every day.
Boys: Promise!
Hella: I acknowledge you did very well today, everything seems perfect. By the way, who did sew the coats back?
OX: I did.
Hella: This is very well done, you should do it more often ;)
Amen: No way. His new hobby is to sting my ass with those needles!
OX: You deserved it. (Everyone laughs)
Hella: I see you had also a little fun. Now if you’ll excuse me, I’m gonna store my new clothes.

A few moments later the monsters heard Hella scream. She came in the living room holding one of her overalls, half dyed in an awful reddish color.
Hella: Who did the f*cking damn laundry?!
Amen: (gulp and hides behind OX) Guys, help me! I'm so dead...

Epilogue
Mr Lordi: You’ve been too harsh on him.
OX: Noooo. He just had what he deserved. Hadn’t he, dear Hella?
Hella: (wicked smile) You’re right OX. That will teach him a good lesson.
Mr Lordi: Where is he anyway?
OX: (chuckles) Last time I saw him, he was still glued to his mattress.
Hella: What a brilliant idea you had, dear Hellbull…
They both clinked glasses as the Mummy entered the room. They almost died of laughter when they saw him. As revenge, OX and Hella had wonderful ideas indeed: OX, with his new sewing skill, sewed the bandages and the rotten skin of the Pharaoh to the sheets and the mattress while he was sleeping. Meanwhile Hella took all the white bandages and dyed them bright pink and various other girly colors. When he woke up, Amen was literally glued to his bed, and he took him a few hours to get out of this, with fewer damages possible. He cursed both the Doll and the Hellbull when he saw his dyed clothes. He was standing now before them, wrapped in pink bandages, with a drawing of Hello Kitty on his skirt. They were truly laughing now, and Amen threw them a death glare. Never make a Mummy angry…
Amen: I hate you both, you twisted bastards!

THE END

That's it! I'm currently writing my next story, which is called "Death Scythe" (no references to Soul Eater please :wink: ). I write it first in french, then I'll translate it. I didn't do this with "The Bet", I wrote it directly in english.
Stay tuned folks! :mrgreen:
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Re: Miss-Elodia's Stories

Postby Maddy » Thu Jul 04, 2013 4:59 pm

That really was a great story!
I really liked to read it. Your ideas are quite interesting & funny. :)

Hope there will be more to read soon! :mrgreen:
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Postby Rosalie » Fri Jul 05, 2013 11:47 am

This is awesome! :mrgreen: I laughed quite a lot during it, very well done! :lol:
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Postby Miss-Elodia » Fri Jul 05, 2013 1:41 pm

Thank you Rosalie and Maddy! Now I can't wait to show you next story. :wink:
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Re: Miss-Elodia's Stories

Postby Miss-Elodia » Sat Jul 20, 2013 10:19 pm

I finally returned from my holidays, and with my new story! It will be composed in a prologue, 24 chapters and a epilogue. So here's the beginning of "Death Scythe".

[EDIT 2020: Elo of the future here! I did a massive rewrite of this story. You can go and read the improved version by clicking the link in my signature.]

Sooo, what do you think? I continue or I quit? Let me know :wink:
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Re: Miss-Elodia's Stories

Postby Maddy » Sun Jul 21, 2013 9:23 pm

Please continue this!
It already sounds really interesting and I want to know what will happen next to Lorelei.
This seems to be a very nice start for a great new story. :D
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Postby Isa » Mon Jul 22, 2013 10:42 am

Let see the follow :)
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Re: Miss-Elodia's Stories

Postby Miss-Elodia » Tue Jul 23, 2013 3:39 pm

Here's the first chapter! Enjoy :mrgreen: (the sentences in italics are the words of the old man)

[EDIT 2020: Elo of the future here! I did a massive rewrite of this story. You can go and read the improved version by clicking the link in my signature.]

What do you think of it? Maybe the 20 years gap is a little bit harsh. No worry, Lorelei's past shall be revealed throughout the story in little additions :wink:
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Re: Miss-Elodia's Stories

Postby Maddy » Wed Jul 24, 2013 9:43 pm

I doesn't bother me that the gap was so big. There surely is a reason that you wrote it like this and it keeps it more interesting when you don't get known to all the facts straight at the beginning. :)

You're style of writing is really great and I enjoy reading your stories alot and now I can't wait for the next chapter.
I'm really curious of how Lorelei's first meeting with Amen will be like!
Please update it soon! :D
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Postby Isa » Fri Jul 26, 2013 11:22 am

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