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Postby Ultimate Warrior » Thu Jun 28, 2007 1:41 pm

That was awesome! And your other stuff sounded great too! :D
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Postby SMF » Thu Jun 28, 2007 7:20 pm

RIP Jayjay. I love you
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Postby UKLFC » Thu Jun 28, 2007 9:18 pm

You're good i gotta say
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Postby The Ace » Thu Jun 28, 2007 9:58 pm

wow ! :shock: Really nice :D Will put this song on my mp3 :D
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Postby Kassidy » Thu Jun 28, 2007 11:29 pm

Overall I'm liking it a lot. I'll start with the good.
-Very catchy
-Great overall composition
-Lyrically well done, themed but not overdone or over clichéd. Good sing-along chorus.
-Vocals are superb, maybe slightly less reverb. Very well done on the overdubs.
-Solo is effective, not over-elaborate. Maybe a bit more work on it, but good as it is.
-I'd like to know what you're using drum-wise, sounds good.
-Lovely use of effects and keyboards. Perfick.

Now for some constructive criticism.
-Could really use a bass track to give it some more body. Obviously difficult if you don't have a bass guitar (do you?).
-Taking the above into consideration, I'd consider trying to boost the guitar a bit with a second guitar track when the solo isn't playing, or at least for the chorus.
-Something says to me to even cut the guitar before the final reprise of the chorus and just have the drums and keyboard, then have them kick back in. This is just an idea to try out maybe, and I may be over-influenced by the use of this in other songs by other groups, so merely food for thought.

That's it really. Hope the above doesn't sound negative, since it's a really good track and I like it (particular emphasis on your vocal, great sound). You've got talent, that's for sure. I haven't listened to the other track yet but I will be doing so shortly.

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Postby SMF » Thu Jun 28, 2007 11:42 pm

Kassidy wrote:Overall I'm liking it a lot. I'll start with the good.
-Very catchy
-Great overall composition
-Lyrically well done, themed but not overdone or over clichéd. Good sing-along chorus.
-Vocals are superb, maybe slightly less reverb. Very well done on the overdubs.
-Solo is effective, not over-elaborate. Maybe a bit more work on it, but good as it is.
-I'd like to know what you're using drum-wise, sounds good.
-Lovely use of effects and keyboards. Perfick.

Now for some constructive criticism.
-Could really use a bass track to give it some more body. Obviously difficult if you don't have a bass guitar (do you?).
-Taking the above into consideration, I'd consider trying to boost the guitar a bit with a second guitar track when the solo isn't playing, or at least for the chorus.
-Something says to me to even cut the guitar before the final reprise of the chorus and just have the drums and keyboard, then have them kick back in. This is just an idea to try out maybe, and I may be over-influenced by the use of this in other songs by other groups, so merely food for thought.

That's it really. Hope the above doesn't sound negative, since it's a really good track and I like it (particular emphasis on your vocal, great sound). You've got talent, that's for sure. I haven't listened to the other track yet but I will be doing so shortly.

The Kassman hath spoken.


Check out the production on the myspace page.. I think these were just done on a simple four track
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Postby Kassidy » Fri Jun 29, 2007 9:34 am

Listening to them now (specifically "When Love Said no" at the moment). I'm feeling the Jovi vibe here. Think my favourite out of this batch is Lady Mystery. Excellent material and well produced. Tiny observation would be that in Lovers and Farrah the rhythm guitar lacks the body that the rest of the instrumentation has, so it sounds out of place (which is a shame because the riffs fit very well).

Have to say, I wish I could get non-guitar instrumentation down as good as you are. Great stuff.


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Postby Joni Master » Fri Jun 29, 2007 10:00 am

Looks nice.
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Postby The Terror of death » Sun Jul 01, 2007 4:06 pm

You tottally got me there dude!!!This song ROCKS!!!Remember keep it up in the old pure spirit of rock!!! Don't let your mind get blinded by comersial shit and money!!! Do it for the idea,for the feeling and you ll be a legend!
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Postby Super_Monstar » Sun Jul 01, 2007 8:31 pm

Holy fuck! Thats awesome!! Chorus sound just like Lordi typed!! TOTALLY AWESOME
Cool solo.
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Postby The Terror of death » Tue Jul 03, 2007 9:44 am

Is there a full version of "Hangman in love" :?:
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Postby grims » Tue Jul 03, 2007 4:35 pm

It's great!!!!!!!!
You rock!
I like the vocals! :shock: :P
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Postby Electrical » Wed Jul 04, 2007 9:41 pm

WOW :shock:
Awesome song and vocals!! :)
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Postby Obsession » Wed Jul 04, 2007 10:43 pm

The Terror of death wrote:Is there a full version of "Hangman in love" :?:


Yes, there is, but it hasn't been released yet, because I'm still working on the solo bit.

But I can already post the lyrics of the second verse:

you turn me on
it can't wrong
I turn the thumbscrews to the max
and love it when your muscles flex

you scream in pain
it's all vain
and soon they'll take you to the pyre
now you're gonna take me higher


Of course, I'll post the final version of the song as soon as it has been finished. Is anyone interest in contributing a blazing guitar solo to the track and has got the technical equipment to record it with his PC and send it me via mail? I'm more a practical rhythm guitarrist than a lead guitar player and any help from another fan would be very much appreciated. The solo style should be a mix of classic Ace Frehley bendings and some more flashy stuff.

You can always contact me via this message board or the e-mail-address given in the songs!

Thanks for the nice comments and keep on rockin'
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Postby SMF » Thu Jul 05, 2007 12:14 am

Obsession wrote:
The Terror of death wrote:Is there a full version of "Hangman in love" :?:


Yes, there is, but it hasn't been released yet, because I'm still working on the solo bit.

But I can already post the lyrics of the second verse:

you turn me on
it can't wrong
I turn the thumbscrews to the max
and love it when your muscles flex

you scream in pain
it's all vain
and soon they'll take you to the pyre
now you're gonna take me higher


Of course, I'll post the final version of the song as soon as it has been finished. Is anyone interest in contributing a blazing guitar solo to the track and has got the technical equipment to record it with his PC and send it me via mail? I'm more a practical rhythm guitarrist than a lead guitar player and any help from another fan would be very much appreciated. The solo style should be a mix of classic Ace Frehley bendings and some more flashy stuff.

You can always contact me via this message board or the e-mail-address given in the songs!

Thanks for the nice comments and keep on rockin'
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I'll do the solo if ya send the song!
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Postby Beauty of the beast » Thu Jul 05, 2007 9:07 pm

Likewise Obsession! I'd love to try a solo for the song, I've always liked your songs and alike SMF I have the means to record and send it to you.

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Postby Painajainen » Fri Jan 11, 2008 1:44 am

Hey whats going on with this? Especially Hangman in love full version. Anything occuring?
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Postby Ayra-Raven » Fri Jan 11, 2008 2:27 pm

Your song is... is... :shock: I can't find the words! It's hellish amazing!!! :D :twisted:
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Postby Narif » Fri Jan 11, 2008 4:22 pm

Its really great except the slaughter hotel ,can i put in on my mp3?:D
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Postby Alvina » Fri Jan 11, 2008 4:40 pm

Wooow!!! That was amazing :shock: :D
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Postby Mr.Blacksmith » Sun Jan 13, 2008 10:35 pm

Whoa..I Love Them..There Just Ozzome...Amazing
The Intro To To ''Hangman In Love'' Reminds Me Of ''Calling Dr. Love'' By Kiss XD
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Postby mikroprose » Mon Jan 14, 2008 7:43 pm

wow they are really nice.. :D :D love them^^
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Postby Beauty of the beast » Wed Jan 16, 2008 12:00 am

Thread has been dead for a long time, we have a "no necroposting" law Mr. Killjoy put into effect here.

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